A
Short Story
Written by: Kaela Street
Date: July 24, 2003
Title: The Gold Coin
Alan sat in the busy airport terminal on the outskirts of Miami, soon to
board his flight back to England after a hectic week in Key Largo,
Florida. He held tightly onto his passport and ticket, the long wait for
the check-in and even the gentle air-conditioning did not help him stay
cool. Hearing the request for first class passengers to come forward, he
rose to his feet, picked up his small flight bag and walked over to the
girls waiting to take his boarding card from him. Moments later, sitting
in the comfort of the airplane, he accepted the invitation from a
stewardess and ordered a glass of red wine.
As passengers milled into the body of the airplane, Alan wondered if
others had flown to so many destinations as he had done in his thirty two
years, for as a software engineer, he enjoyed the opportunity to travel
world wide, often at short notice. From his shirt pocket, he retrieved a
large gold coin, deformed with age yet in excellent condition for the
hundreds of years it had lay at the bottom of the sea inside the wreck of
the Spanish Galleon known as the Atocia, it sank during a storm while
crossing the Caribbean. He knew that buying trinkets for his wife, Jenny,
was the only way he could make up for not being at home, and with each
trip, he tried to buy something that she could treasure in his long
absences. The marriage of ten years was suffering, and while he was home
they had arguments and rows over things that to Alan, seemed meaningless,
and Jenny seemed to demand more from him each day.
Alan had seen the coin in a display case, he had also seen the replicas,
just as stunning, but costing a hundredth of the real thing he held in his
hand. This coin had a gold wire frame with a loop attached to a gold
chain, he felt it would look perfect on Jenny, and he smiled knowing how
proud she would be to wear it when they went out next time. Once the
airplane was in the air, sliding through clouds over Miami heading east to
Europe and England, he picked up the telephone from the side rest and
dialed his home number. It seemed to ring for ages before the voice of a
man answered the call. He asked for Jenny, and was told that Jenny could
not come to the phone, but asked who was calling. He told the voice it was
Alan, and asked again to speak to Jenny.
The line was closed and as Alan heard the dial tone come back, he feared
that something terrible had happened at home. He dialed again, but it rang
of the hook. He stabbed in the mobile number for Jenny that too rang and
rang, eventually going to voice mail. He felt annoyed and scared at the
same time, "Call me, Please babe, I am on the way home, see you
tonight Jenny, Let me know your ok darling". He hung up and realized
Jenny could not call him, his Mobile was switched off in the airplane and
he did not know the number that she would dial to contact him on the
airplane.
Hardly touching his meal, and taking no interest in the range of movies
available to him, he tried to sleep, but sleep did not come easy for his
mind raced trying to work out who the man’s voice had been on the
telephone. Another call, this time, when the phone was picked up, he
demanded to speak to Jenny. The phone was put down on him again. He dialed
again, but the phone now showed as busy and his call was rejected.
Hours later, as the airplane landed at Heathrow, he peered out of the
window and watched the gray overcast sky as the non-stop rain seemed to
flood the tarmac as the airplane slowed down. The run along the Gantry to
the arrival lounge seemed to consume him and dragging his overnight bag,
its little wheels almost scorching the floor, he made it to Customs and
Immigration. Passport checked and welcomed back to England, he made for
the car parks and breathlessly ran to his car still nestling in the dim
fluorescent overhead lights of the dirty concrete parking area. As he
cleared the airport and headed for the M4 motorway, he punched in his
access code for the car phone and again called home. Still the line showed
busy, his foot now pressing the accelerator harder and harder to shorten
the journey time.
Weaving in and out of the slow traffic, he headed towards the M25 and then
hoped the roads were clearer on the way to Oxford, his home, his wife and
the joy of being home again. The speedometer climbed as he started to take
risks in the crowded traffic lanes, the rain relentlessly cascading before
him, the spray reducing his visibility as the Jaguar quickly and quietly
pushed its way forward. The accident was over in seconds, the car catching
another and flipping onto its roof, followed by the impact of the heavy
goods vehicles. He felt no pain as the car was crushed about him, seemed
to realize little as the flames took hold and probably wondered what was
happening as the life was squeezed from him by yet another impact.
The police traced his wife and delivered the news of his death, she seemed
to care little, for Jenny, the marriage had died years ago with his
constantly being away, she explained that his buying trinkets for her was
no compensation, she had loved him, but had started to hate him replacing
himself with junk from other countries, they were no replacement for him.
They offered her the items of personal value that had been recovered,
amongst them, the golden coin from the Atocia. She looked at it, described
it as more junk and gave it back to the officer. The officers left feeling
saddened, and the coin eventually passed to an auction of goods that the
police could no longer find a home for. The bidding was furious, and
eventually the hammer came down on a fortune, for the coin was one of the
most rare ever found. How much Alan had paid remained a secret, but the
person that bought the coin, could have bought a large country home for
the same amount. Alan had invested in the coin, hoping it would make Jenny
happy, but he had failed to understand it was not the presents, but his
presence that would have saved his marriage to Jenny.
Written by Kaela Street, copyright 2003.
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